谢谢你，半梦半醒！

花小溪

春风一直吹呀吹
从春一直吹到夏
吹来了草绿花红
也吹来一个半梦半醒

仿佛是擦肩而过
不小心碰落了我的包
于是，不得不抱歉
一边客气一边闲聊

有时明白你想说啥
但好多时候却迷迷瞪瞪
不管你是大哥还是大叔
感谢有你相伴一程

花小溪

@半梦半醒 感谢你老跟着我

半梦半醒

有时明白你想说啥
但好多时候却迷迷瞪瞪


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半梦半醒。



长相思·山一程   清·纳兰性德
山一程，水一程，身向榆关那畔行，夜深千帐灯。
风一更，雪一更，聒碎乡心梦不成，故园无此声。


半梦半醒，夜游花溪，这不是神经病吗？

花小溪

半梦半醒 发表于 2023-5-13 07:44
有时明白你想说啥
但好多时候却迷迷瞪瞪

你要的是这个效果吧

半梦半醒

花小溪 发表于 2023-5-13 07:50
你要的是这个效果吧

我对诗歌的理解就是介于明白和不萌白之间，有时就是迷迷瞪瞪的。

半梦半醒

  俺最近经常夜游，包场过三个公园，公园内各种设计和造型都挺有艺术气息，待遇颇似中央首长，只有警卫在看大门，园内一个人都没有。

半梦半醒

花小溪 发表于 2023-5-13 07:50
你要的是这个效果吧

    后果 是我经常想的，效果和后果区别是什么呢？  


效果，英译effect; effectiveness，是由某种动因或原因所产生的结果、后果。效果是指在给定的条件下由其动因或其它原因或多因子叠加等行为对特定事物，所产生的系统性或单一性结果。由某种因素造成的结果:收到良好的效果。指演出中人工设计安排的光照、声音等:模拟火车开动的音响效果很逼真。

后果(汉语词语)

consequence
后果是一个汉语词汇，拼音是hòu guǒ，一般指有害的或不幸的结果，或者做某件事的后效。语出《南齐书·高逸传论》:"今树以前因，报以后果，业行交酬，连璅相袭。"

半梦半醒

  也许活在当下的人讲究戏剧效果，思考未来的人更看重后果是否对前程构成不利的影响。   论生理年龄是我是你大叔是肯定的，我都退休了，你还没工作过。

你的人生还没开始，而我面临的是重新开始。

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      再有，我的小孩和你，涛仔年龄相仿，年轻人的处世哲学和我们这代人是不一样的，通过交流，我可以了解一点。

半梦半醒

  回到你诗的语境，让我想起一首很浪漫的英文歌曲。

Perfect Accident 中英字幕(fang1169制) - Jesse Lab        找不到视频了。、


Perfect Accident - Jesse Labelle Jesse Labelle出生于加拿大多伦多市外形帅气的Jesse Labelle在小时候就表现出对音乐的深厚的兴趣学会了钢琴与吉他演奏




他是个创作型歌手。

Perfect Accident - Jesse Labelle

Walking through a red light

Staring at the ground I fell over you

You caught me with my guard down

But I felt safe and sound right there with you

My heart was wide open

And as I crashed into you I learned that

Some signs are made while some are sent

To me you're just a perfect accident

I could not have planned or understand

You were just the perfect accident

Walking under ladders

Doesn't really matter anymore

With all the luck in this world

I've finally found what I've been looking for

Now my eyes are wide open

And when I'm looking at you I know that

Some signs are made while some are sent

To me you're just a perfect accident

I could not have planned or understand

You were just the perfect accident

The more I try

The less I find

But with a little time

Good things come to those who wait

My heart was wide open

And as I crashed into you I learned that

Some signs are made while some are sent

To me you're just a perfect accident

I could not have planned or understand

You were just the perfect accident

Oh to me you're just a perfect accident

Oh-ohh you're just a perfect accident